I like the first picture which you used complimentary color and it achieves very well. You applied different values and saturation on different shapes. The drawer is very catchy because you used the most saturated red. Also you used the least saturated color on the shadow. Color contrast makes the whole image look very real.
Since you don’t have the spread image, I can’t tell the flow of your book.
Q1: The first piece is the most visually striking because of the saturation of the complimentary colors. They fight with each other for attention but the blend is still pleasing to look at. I was torn between that piece and the one with the microphone because the sliver body of the mic stands out against the wave of blue and green and draw my focus right away.
Q2: I feel like the guitar is the least visually striking. If it was on its own it would be a very good piece however when it is surrounded by the other pieces it is very monotone and bland.
Q3: The overall flow is very smooth, since all the pieces are similar with the color concept and how one object is kind of set as the focal point.
Q1: The sixth composition is very nice- my eye is drawn right to the cube- having the warm colors be present there, in direct contrast with the overall cool look of the image makes it stand out. Q2: the image of the keyboard is the least visually interesting. The combination of the mostly monochromatic color scheme and the overly simple composition makes the image less interesting than all of the other images in the book. Q3: There is a great sense of unity in the book. The styles of the images are all very similar, and the great sense of detail and muted palette works. However, there are some formatting issues the sizes of the images, and the way that the book works. Overall, the book is really nice to look at.
Q1 - For me, the most striking piece is the 6th one with the art tablet. The position of the hand really gives a great sense of movement, like you're tapping the pen against the tablet involuntarily while waiting for a program to load or something. It gives this nice relaxed feeling to the image that I really like, and the subdued color tones are soft and dark, not aggressive. Q2 - The least striking for me is the first one, I just don't really like the pinky red and mint green clash, I feel like different temperature selections of the colors would have been better. Unless you were going for a really angry clash, in which case good job. It's just not that appealing to me. Q3 - The attention to detail throughout the book is really consistent throughout, the hyper-realism is really well portrayed stylistically and the story of the day is very easy to follow. It was really enjoyable :)
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I like the first picture which you used complimentary color and it achieves very well. You applied different values and saturation on different shapes. The drawer is very catchy because you used the most saturated red. Also you used the least saturated color on the shadow. Color contrast makes the whole image look very real.
Since you don’t have the spread image, I can’t tell the flow of your book.
Q1: The first piece is the most visually striking because of the saturation of the complimentary colors. They fight with each other for attention but the blend is still pleasing to look at. I was torn between that piece and the one with the microphone because the sliver body of the mic stands out against the wave of blue and green and draw my focus right away.
Q2: I feel like the guitar is the least visually striking. If it was on its own it would be a very good piece however when it is surrounded by the other pieces it is very monotone and bland.
Q3: The overall flow is very smooth, since all the pieces are similar with the color concept and how one object is kind of set as the focal point.
A1: The one of your hand and the tablet really sticks out to me. The big amount of cold color with a little hint of red looks great!
A2: Maybe it is the first page. But it probably because that one does not detailed as much as the others.
A3: The over all continuity of the book looks great. The colors and the form make the book flow from page to page.
Q1: The sixth composition is very nice- my eye is drawn right to the cube- having the warm colors be present there, in direct contrast with the overall cool look of the image makes it stand out.
Q2: the image of the keyboard is the least visually interesting. The combination of the mostly monochromatic color scheme and the overly simple composition makes the image less interesting than all of the other images in the book.
Q3: There is a great sense of unity in the book. The styles of the images are all very similar, and the great sense of detail and muted palette works. However, there are some formatting issues the sizes of the images, and the way that the book works. Overall, the book is really nice to look at.
Q1 - For me, the most striking piece is the 6th one with the art tablet. The position of the hand really gives a great sense of movement, like you're tapping the pen against the tablet involuntarily while waiting for a program to load or something. It gives this nice relaxed feeling to the image that I really like, and the subdued color tones are soft and dark, not aggressive.
Q2 - The least striking for me is the first one, I just don't really like the pinky red and mint green clash, I feel like different temperature selections of the colors would have been better. Unless you were going for a really angry clash, in which case good job. It's just not that appealing to me.
Q3 - The attention to detail throughout the book is really consistent throughout, the hyper-realism is really well portrayed stylistically and the story of the day is very easy to follow. It was really enjoyable :)
-Julie-
well, I rechecked your book and found out that your book actually flows very well both on the shapes and colors.
hey thanks man
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